Thursday, April 1, 2010

LOS TRABAJOS Y LAS NOCHES

por Julio Cesar Perez Mendez

Una característica meridiana de Los trabajos y las noches es la densidad, entendida en la definición: “De mucho contenido o profundidad en poco espacio”.

Para lograrlo, Pizarnik evita la abundancia y escoge lo mínimo: Palabras exactas con posibilidades de amplificación, tejidas mediante una sintaxis diáfana, cuya brújula apunta al deseo.

Verbos:
· Se ofrecen en su expresión más pura. El primer grupo (Reconocer, significar, sustentar), trae consigo la aceptación de una identidad que partiendo de lo personal ha encontrado su reflejo en una necesidad física básica, y en una especie de fijación onírica, complementada con el Yo implícito, y que formalmente se nutre con la anáfora. El Errar, adjetivado, se presenta como el borde de un abismo que hace encontrar después del salto al verso siguiente, su transmutación o referenciación en el símbolo mítico de la loba. En el último verso, es el Decir, el que propone el giro que pretende contrastar con la pátina erótica que cubre los anteriores, al anunciar la inocencia, pero en vez, la incrementa y abre la puerta a la fascinación poética.

Sustantivos:
· Se caracterizan, por fortalecer el sustrato sexual que anida en el poema, y recorren planos que van desde la afectación corporal –tocada sutilmente por cierta fragancia masoquista- (Sed); lo íntimo-icónico (Emblema, ofrenda); lo mitológico o intertextual (loba en el bosque), la invitación prudente combinada con la insinuación voyeurista (la noche de los cuerpos), y los conceptos ancestrales de amor, sueño y palabra.

Adjetivos:
· Pizarnik concibió una pieza en la que hizo posible la invisibilidad de la cualidad, como producto de resaltar lo esencial del objeto. Tres únicos adjetivos acompañan el orden de los versos: único, puro e inocente.

Algo más después de ello, sería un gusano en la guayaba.
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Wednesday, March 31, 2010

Una interpretación de The Wild Iris de Louise Glück (1992)




En este poema se sucede un tránsito arquetípico: aquel que se repite en el relato de muerte y resurrección de quien regresa renovado para comunicar su aprendizaje, para entregar su palabra. Aquí asistimos a la transformación de quien encuentra una voz propia tras un periodo de silencio. Es el lenguaje poético el que obra la individuación del arquetipo y da a la pieza el sentido de su existencia.

Veamos cómo Louise Glück arquea la narrativa del mito de resurrección en el poema. El movimiento que tiene lugar en el poema nace en el sufrimiento de quien exhorta al otro -al - para ser escuchado(a); luego, se detiene en la penumbra de "una consciencia sepultada en la rígida tierra (...), un alma incapaz de hablar (que más tarde renace cuando) pudo hablar de nuevo. (Y, como todo aquel que) retorna del olvido (lo hizo) para encontrar una voz. (La voz poética surge) del centro, de la fuente, de la profundidad de las aguas azules." Bien podríamos decir: resurge de la noche oscura del alma, parafraseando a San Juan de la Cruz.

Como vemos, el poema nace, transita y muere en imágenes comunes: la puerta de paso al otro mundo que espera al doliente como alivio de su sufrimiento, el retorno desde el otro mundo tras encontrar la gran fuente de vida en las profundidades del yo, sombra azul de un mar azur. Pero escapa del estereotipo porque lo protege un misterio: el título, ese iris silvestre, salvaje, que irradia los versos con su reserva.

¿A quién le habla el poema? ¿Quién es el que interpela? ¿A qué dimensión pertenece ese iris silvestre, ese lirio salvaje que no puedo imaginar sino azul, aun cuando los haya blancos, malva y amarillos? ¿Acaso su misterio descansa en la sencillez de la flor, que crece en primavera en los bosques de Jerusalén? ¿Acaso su virtud poética se teje en la textura cromática del azul, entrelazado al azur marino que se suman al iris del título? Este juego de tonalidades nos acerca al violeta asociado con la visión mística de la muerte, de cuyas profundidades emerge la voz para regresar vivificada, desde el otro mundo. ¿Acaso todo este azul no sea otro que el azul iridiscente de unos ojos que callan, los ojos de aquel o aquella que es interpelado(a)? ¿Acaso se trata de Iris, la mensajera de Zeus y Era, símbolo de la unión entre Cielo y Tierra?

Sin duda, desentrañar el misterio abriría otras puertas a la interpretación.


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Tuesday, March 30, 2010

Review of The Iowa Review

The Iowa Review is published three times a year in April, August and December. This journal publishes unsolicited poetry, fiction and non-fiction. One of my co-workers suggested this journal to me when I asked her about poetry journals. On one of their links, there is a list of reviews from readers and one from a newspaper which adds to the journal’s respectability. It is also associated with the University of Iowa.
Unsolicited submissions to The Iowa Review can be made in September, October and November and must include a SASE. E-mail submissions will not be accepted. To submit specifically in the poetry genre, “Poetry” must be written on the cover letter included with the submissions. The journal asks for a submission of up to five poems at a time. They publish poetry of all kinds. They do pay for poems that are published ($1.50 per line of poetry with a $40 minimum). They purchase the rights to anything that is published in the journal.
In order to review a full journal, one must subscribe to The Iowa Review but there is a Table of Contents for each of the back issues on their website and several of these have links to the actual poems. I was actually able to read quite a few poems from these links. The poetry published is a wide variety of mostly free verse poems that have very strong imagery. They welcome new, unpublished writers as well as established poets. The contact information is as follows: The Iowa Review 308 EPB Iowa City, IA 52242 (319) 335-0462.
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La pública intimidad de Glück

La poesía norteamericana, a veces, trasuda la idea de una nación consciente de ser potencia. Sus poetas se nos confiesan abiertamente. Son ambiciosos y en su intento logran agredirnos sin insultarnos. Ellos también saben que necesitan a sus lectores. Se nota un profesionalismo en sus artistas que no es moneda común en otros países.
Louise Glück puede enmarcarse en este grupo. Consciente de estar en la misma tradición norteamericana de Emily Dickinson, esta poeta nos habla de las pequeñas cosas. Pero no de las pequeñas cosas en general, si no de “sus” pequeñas cosas. En el Iris salvaje el diálogo con el lector es constante. Le habla a sabiendas de que no tendrá respuesta. Sin ilusión pero con la sensación de haber cumplido una misión personal. No de salvación, sino de alivio y desahogo.
Los versos conversan sobre destellos, el aguante, las tristeza, el sufrimiento y los errores. Pasean hijos y plantas, capítulos dispersos de su biografía. Lo abstracto con lo real en una danza incesante.
Hay terredad, pero a su vez la conciencia del aire, de lo etéreo.
Esa es la cotidianidad de Glück, su intimidad pública. La que comparte con sus lectores.
Incluso cuando todo parece estar perdido.
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Journal Review of The Shine

Stevie Cenko
Review of The Shine

http://theshinejournal.com/

“The Shine Journal has been on-line since January 2007. It is a home for some of the best, most exceptional flash fiction, non-fiction, poetry, art, art and photography in the world! Many creatives got their start here-why not you?”

Pamela Tyree Griffin
Editor

The on-line and print journal has been published monthly, but is now switching to an undecided quarterly or bi-annual publication. The Shine Journal archives its past issues on its website.

There is a poetry contest: http://www.theshinejournal.com/poetrycontest.htm

The poetry contest is free to enter and the first place winner will be nominated for the Pushcart Prize and receive $100. The judge will be poet Edward Nudelman. The possibility of becoming nominated for the Pushcart Prize is incentive enough to submit one’s work to this journal.

The Shine Journal prides itself in discovering new talent and publishing established talent. An example of an emerging poet published in the March 2010 issue is:

To Die in Bed
by
Paul Hellweg

To die in bed
is the goal most of us have,
comfortable,
minimal pain,
sedated,
a boring end
to timid lives,
but there is another way,
there are some of us
who would rather die
in an icy avalanche,
or in a grizzly’s
unforgiving embrace,
or maybe like Bierce,
in a revolution
of our own choosing,
or better yet ??
making love
on a mountaintop,
trading verses from Neruda
with a sexy inamorata/o
while clouds
glimmer overhead
like pink orchids,
and the setting sun
takes almost everything,
leaving
only
our
best
poems
behind.

________________________________________

Motivation: Both my parents died in bed, so this poem is a rebellion -- I want something more.

Bio: Paul Hellweg has felt his whole life as if he didn’t belong. Then a few months ago he discovered a whole new world of kindred spirits in the poetry universe, both online and at readings throughout the Los Angeles area. He’s thrilled to have finally found a place where he fits in just fine.


There are links to helpful websites from how to avoid scams and for free writing courses.

Also linked to The Shine Journal is Editor Pamela Tyree Griffin’s alter-ego journal titled joyful!:

http://www.joyfulonline.net/

Joyful’s! statement is: “Since 2008, joyful!has been a place where all types of high quality work with a spiritual, motivational and/or religious point of view are respected. No one religious or spiritual belief is favored over another. joyful! seeks to be a place where all who have wonderful creative gifts to share are welcomed to submit. While not every submission can be accepted, every submission is read/reviewed by me. When possible, I try to send a personal response.”

The third place winner of Joyful’s! most recent poetry contest is:

Archival Copies
by
Ted O. Badger


If I could duplicate today
on a good copy machine,
I would set the counter number
to a full one-thousand at least,
then pray for no paper jam.

For I would like to reproduce
and file for my future access
all those things we have both
said and felt during all of our
closed-door together times.

Then, on those lonely, rainy days,
When you’re far beyond my reach,
I could page through the copies
and relive those cherished hours.

♥♥♥

Ted O. Badger is a native Texan, veteran of World War Two, graduate of Baylor University, published poet, editor and publisher of Lucidity Poetry Journal (now in its 25th year) and founder of the Lucidity Ozark Poetry Retreat that meets annually in Arkansas.
The submission requirements for The Shine Journal are very open:

“POETRY CONTEST INFORMATION
Anything arriving before 6:00AM EST on April 1, 2010 will be deleted. Anything arriving after 6:00 AM EST April 30, 2010 will be deleted.

The Shine Journal Annual Poetry Contest starts April 1, 2010 6:00 AM EST- Free to enter, it runs until April 30, 2010 6:00 AM EST. Prizes-Pushcart Nomination and 100.00 for First Place, 50.00 for Second Place and 25.00 for Third Place.

Here are the rules:

Do NOT use the submissions form. Send your submission via email after reading the remaining rules below.

One poem per person - no exceptions.

No poem over 100 lines will be accepted.

Any type of poem is fine.

No submissions from anyone under the age of 13.

No profanity, gratuitous sex. No racial or gender preference epithets -you know the drill.

Your email subject line should say: Poetry Contest: Title of your poem

The content of your message should have:

Your Legal Name
1. Short Bio
2. Motivation for the work
Put your work next--NO ATTACHMENTS will be accepted. Mail to: shinesubmit@fastmail.us

Anything arriving before 6:00AM EST on April 1, 2010 will be deleted. Anything arriving after 6:00 AM EST April 30, 2010 will be deleted.

I encourage all of my classmates to enter this contest.
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Review of Gulf Coast

by Karen Dockal

Gulf Coast: A Journal of Literature and Fine Arts is published twice a year (October and April) by the University of Houston, Department of English. The Journal was founded by Donald Barthelme and Philip Lopate in 1986.


Though the fiction is strong and predictably professional in this well-established journal, poetry titles dominate with over sixty works total in the Winter/Spring 2009 edition, including a collection from Alice Notley. There are slightly over forty titles of fiction, reviews, and essays.


The first poem in this issue, “Some Feel Rain” by Joanna Klink, promises a musical selection:


“When it falls apart, some feel the moondark air
drops its motes to the patch-thick slopes of
snow. Tiny blinking of ice from the oak,”

As does Terese Svoboda’s “Avieoli” (sic)

“Could be birds on branches
clicking their hot-tailed haunches

against bark, your ear can’t avoid
hearing your under-deployed

lung’s catch in the middle..”

“Avieoli” is included in a collection entitled “The New Loneliness and this collections shows the breadth of styles that Gulf Coast embraces.


This can be seen in the tight run-on sentences of “A Pineapple for Matt” by Aaron Balkan which races down the page then bumps up against the sprawled out but spare works from Jordan Davis (“Text Messages) and David Dodd Lee (“World Weight”).


Gulf Coast’s description in Novel & Short Story Writer’s Market (likewise on Writer’s Digest’s marketplace pages) purports to publish two to eight “new” writers per year and I was hard pressed to find unpublished authors in the two volumes I read. The next volume is to “feature poetry by nine emerging women poets” come fall of 2010. Of course, “emerging” is open to interpretation. The Book Fox (http://www.thejohnfox.com/bookfox/ranking-of-literary-journ.html) rates Gulf Coast as “strongly competitive.” Since Mr. Fox’s ranking system is not based solely on how difficult it is to get into print in the journal, it may be an accurate ranking. On the basis of my limited view of two lovely volumes of the journal and looking only at “breaking into” the publication, it is probably more accurate to place Gulf Coast in the Highly Competitive ranks.


Nevertheless, poetic styles are quite varied in the issues indicating that Gulf Coast’s revolving “readers” and editors are representing a variety of tastes. Good news for contributors.
Gulf Coast has recently added electronic submission to its website but eventually will discontinue accepting paper submissions. The e-submission process itself is slightly awkward but this is a factor of the software interface which is used (by other journals as well) for on-line submissions and less a matter of Gulf Coast’s expectations. Unsolicited submissions are not accepted between April 15th and August 15th. Response time is given as 4-6 months.


Guidelines can be found at http://www.gulfcoastmag.org/index.php?n=5.
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Los trabajos y las noches


POR: Rubén Varona

Alejandra Pizarnik en el libro de poemas Los trabajos y las noches, publicado en 1965, con el carácter osado de una suicida, canta desde sus entrañas a la noche, al amor, a la fatalidad y a la nostalgia.

Aunque a veces surrealista, su universo poético no anida en el mundo de lo abstracto, pues mediante una creativa experimentación con el lenguaje, desciende al plano de lo concreto; es así como las imágenes creadas, las metáforas y el simbolismo, se pueden tocar, se pueden oler, se pueden pensar y sobre todo, se puede sentir.

La intensidad y la nitidez con que aborda los sentimientos, sus temores más profundos, su propio descubrimiento, se retrata en la poesía como una burla metafísica al tiempo, como si la Pizarnik hubiese dedicado la vida a hablar de la muerte, de su propia muerte, la del suicida, que se alimenta del claroscuro de la noche, donde se muestra la transparencia del alma, la locura que se revela con la luz del día, pero que pertenece al reino de las sombras, a la inmensidad de la noche, a la guarida del silencio.

Sí, no tengo dudas, Pizarnik es una poetisa de la noche, de la oscuridad, invocada en las sombras y en sus danzas con el tiempo; afina su canto con el sonambulismo que huye de los rayos de luz y se alimenta de las tinieblas tan sólo iluminadas por los cirios de la melancolía y la muerte, por el abandono y la orfandad.

LOS OJOS ABIERTOS

Alguien mide sollozando

La extensión del alba.

Alguien apuñala la almohada

En busca de su imposible

Lugar de reposo


En Los trabajos y las noches, se percibe la necesidad de una poeta que no sólo escribe con palabras, sino con su vida misma; como pocos es capaz de impregnar la vida con el hado de la nostalgia y causar un efecto de sorpresa en el lector; tal vez ahí se encuentra la explicación a las referencias a la infancia, a la inocencia, a sus visiones, miedos y fantasmas.

El silencio aparece como la unidad de medida para la profundidad de sus versos; el silencio como la herramienta para desenterrar el tiempo; para traspasar los límites humanos; para luchar contra la muerte, dama siempre presente, vigilante y seductora.

Es interesante como en Los trabajos y las noches, los títulos hacen parte integral de los poemas y se leen como un todo, siendo imprescindibles para establecer un sentido. Cada repetición de frases y versos, es diferente de la siguiente, pues aunque contengan las mismas palabras, llevan el poema más allá, trasgrediendo meros planos estéticos, metafísicos y de significación.

INFANCIA

Hora en que la yerba crece

En la memoria del caballo.

El viento pronuncia discursos ingenuos

en honor de las lilas,

alguien entra en la muerte

con los ojos abiertos

como Alicia en el país de lo ya visto.


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Review of Poetry Magazine


Poetry Magazine, published by the Poetry Foundation, www.poetryfoundation.org, is one of the oldest, most respected U.S. poetry journals. Founded in 1912 by Harriet Monroe, the journal has published works by famous poets such as T.S. Eliott, Anne Sexton, Joyce Kilmer, Robert Frost and William Carlos Williams before they were established.

The journal takes great pride it’s “open door” publication policy. Poetry encourages submissions from all poetry genres and schools, and chooses not to set themes for each issue like many journals. I think this is terrific, because it leaves poets unconstrained in what they choose to write and submit. Since Poetry was established, the publication’s mission statement expresses their desire “
to print the best English verse which is being written today, regardless of where, by whom, or under Poetry is well known and is easy to locate -- it consistently lands in the top fifteen entries when you search Google for “poetry.”

Each issue of Poetry contains numerous poets’ works, reviews of poetry and letters to the editors, mostly comments on poetry and our society. While there are exceptions, the majority of published poems appear to be no longer than an 8 ½ by 11 page, for example the following two poems:


I knew something was wrong

by Dorothea Grossman

I knew something was wrong

the day I tried to pick up a

small piece of sunlight

and it slithered through my fingers,

not wanting to take shape.

Everything else stayed the same—

the chairs and the carpet

and all the corners

where the waiting continued.

Source: Poetry (March 2010).


In the loop

by Bob Hicok

I heard from people after the shootings. People

I knew well or barely or not at all. Largely

the same message: how horrible it was, how little

there was to say about how horrible it was.

People wrote, called, mostly e-mailed

because they know I teach at Virginia Tech,

to say, there’s nothing to say. Eventually

I answered these messages: there’s nothing

to say back except of course there’s nothing

to say, thank you for your willingness

to say it. Because this was about nothing.

A boy who felt that he was nothing,

who erased and entered that erasure, and guns

that are good for nothing, and talk of guns

that is good for nothing, and spring

that is good for flowers, and Jesus for some,

and scotch for others, and “and” for me

in this poem, “and” that is good

for sewing the minutes together, which otherwise

go about going away, bereft of us and us

of them. Like a scarf left on a train and nothing

like a scarf left on a train. As if the train,

empty of everything but a scarf, still opens

its doors at every stop, because this

is what a train does, this is what a man does

with his hand on a lever, because otherwise,

why the lever, why the hand, and then it was over,

and then it had just begun.

The publication prints eleven times a year and digital editions are available online for 1987 and the years 1999 to the most recent March 2010 publication: http://www.poetryfoundation.org/poetrymagazine/index.html

Also helpful for poets considering submission, online are monthly podcasts from the editors speaking about the most recent publication. These podcast give insight in to the nature of the publication.

Individual copies of the journal are $4.25 each, and a year’s subscription costs $35. They do offer a student subscription – 11 issues for $17.50. Poetry does solicit advertising -- to those who prefer an ad-free literary journal.

To submit your work to Poetry, set up an online account at submissions.poetrymagazine.org. They only accept unpublished work, and submission response time is 6-8 weeks. If your work is accepted, Poetry is a paying publication ($10 per line, $300 minimum and two copies of the publication) and you will be eligible for the magazine’s prestigious annual prizes. Only poems accepted for publication in Poetry are considered eligible for their contest.

I leave you with my one of my favorite poems from the March 2010 issue:


I have to tell you

by Dorothea Grossman

I have to tell you,

there are times when

the sun strikes me

like a gong,

and I remember everything,

even your ears.
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Sunday, March 28, 2010

Journal Review: Blazevox

BlazeVox literary magazine is listed with Poets and Writers and is the only magazine that I have yet to come across that actually provides author feedback although I’m sure there are more out there it just seems almost a nice novelty. They accept simultaneous submissions in poetry, fiction, experimental and literary reviews and have a small publishing press that produces ebooks and chapbooks. I even found a short movie produced by one of their editors, Geoffrey Gatza, in the last issue of a man ( I cannot say for sure if this was Geoffrey himself) smoking a bowl , listening to classical music, and obsessively moving around scissors, tape, pen and Kenneth Goldsmith’s book “Day”. The climax for me was when he finally begins to cut apart “Day” with a sharpie tool and a ruler.
One sign of the ‘experimental’ is in their publishing poetry by artists such as Christina Manweller’s poems which include interesting language, squiggles, brackets, em dashes and ampersands along with sections of poems whose lines consist of one to two words. Heather Fowler’s poem “Love Child” reads more like a 12 page short story than prose in its style rendering the speaker’s parents meeting and their love relationship.
BlazeVox is even bold enough to include rhyming poems whereas many mags shun them like a girl in striped tights. April A’s two abab rhyme scheme poems “The Voice of Despair” and “Nothing Else Counts” seem to struggle for a more complex form.
BlazeVox does boast an impressive array of chapbooks, one of which is Jennifer J. Thompson’s Naming God where she goes anywhere from variations on villanelles to prevailing themes of flowers and the sensual power play between the sexes and dialectic from the biblical to VanGogh. One line I cherish from her collection is found in the final poem, “I Am Certain That This Is My First Love Poem,” Simplicity can be a virtue, but unrelieved simplicity/begins to seem simple. This sort of insight, raw humor and wit is found throughout the work.
Another of their highlighted authors, Joe Milford has multiple volumes published Volume 1 of which is titled, Cracked Altimeter and shows a playfulness of language and rhyme in the poems “maybe in me” and in “I invite you into me.” In the 23 section poem “Nomad’s rags” some of the complexity of his lines and language can be seen: born postmodern, abortion post-partum/I, a speaking morgue of a thousand axioms skinned/seasoned with the need to icon, carrying the pelts/ of culture-killed myths, and I will deliver/ this unidentified object to you, try to/ figure it out, try to fly it. And later within the same poem the spirit of experimentation which becomes more recognizable as integral to getting published here surfaces: I am an anarchanachronometricist---/I made this word up, this occupation/ out-of-context with timelines.

BlazeVox currently discovered it is deficient in their publishing and is now in the process of “promoting the work of women who are courageous, innovative, definition defying writers.” And all BlazeVox says you need to do to meet their criteria is not produce work that “sucks,” I suppose one author review and you will know if you are in that number or not. Email submissions to: editor@blazevox.org
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Journal Review: 2River

The literary magazine, 2River, is listed with both Poets and Writers and New Pages.com Literary Magazine Listings. and has been publishing four times a year since 1996. The magazine now includes poetry chapbooks and multi-media presentations of poetry completely archived and available online. Email submissions are accepted but simultaneous submissions are discouraged and if you’ve been hoping to get your work ‘out there’ on a blog or personal website then don’t bother submitting it here, 2River wants only unpublished work.
Many chapbooks feature artistic covers and a number are available for listening to as an audio file. Detailed attention to meter and form prevail through the works. Precision and attention to the containment of the poem leave little room for whimsical meanderings. One example is Peter Weltner’s poem “Clothes like a dove” which consists of seven sections of ten line stanzas, each neatly tucked and broken at nearly the same length with little variation.
2River seems to favor strongly thematic, unified, and cohesive work in which it is easy to match the poet with the poem such as in the chapbook,“Color Field,” by Mark Cunningham. The chapbook is composed of thirteen prose poems aptly named after individual colors. Each poem breaks free in looser associations within their form using the color as a starting block, a configuration of premeditated thought.
In Christien Gholson’s chapbook, “How the world was made,” Gholson gracefully leaps from working in factories and taking smokebreaks to girls selling pamphlets in a casual conversational tone of the speaker, I kept her talking because I/wanted her to stay the night. She wasn’t bad looking. I imagined her/ standing next to the bed, streetlight falling across her naked body. She knew what I was doing but she was tired from walking to door all/day, so played along. Only two lines later he has brought the reader to a much less comfortable place of murder, though not that of the expected girl selling pamphlets as a victim. Gholson continues in his stark and bleak frankness in the poem “Patterns.” Some tell the future by examining entrails. Examining what’s in the/stomach will tell you something about the land around you. With complete surprising yet congruent shifts he moves the poem forward. Something’s been circling over the river these past few nights. It’s no bird. And maybe in summation is the line from “I dreamed I saw Joe Hill last night,” I am the last. I am writing a poem tracing the genealogy of the garbage I/ collect. I am stealing back everything that has been stolen from me.
While 2River describes itself as “preferring poems with image, subtlety, and point of view, a surface of worldly exactitude, as well as depth of semantic ambiguity; and a voice that negotiates with its body of predecessors,” I found that they are also open to the plain and honest voice that isn’t always so subtle. But if you want to be published here you should heed their advice overall regarding the quality of work.

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